The Hypno Lord Cometh

In this 4000 word short story, Prime Minister John Rogers is interviewing a mesmerist for his exclusive private party- but insists nobles can't be mesmerized. The mesmerist proceeds to prove him wrong, however, and John is rendered helpless, able only to watch as his own wife is turned into the mesmerist's personal plaything! For Mature Audiences Only.



EXCERPT



“Nonsense.” Antonio said. He turned to look at her. “You’d feel wonderful. You’d feel like nothing else in the world mattered except being on that stage. Because of the trance state, you’d feel so relaxed and so good on stage. It would feel like the most wonderful place in the world, the place you always belonged, the place where you felt right. You would want it more than anything else.”

“I… that does sound… appealing.” Amy said, breathily. She was looking at Antonio now, her gaze locked squarely on his.

“You would be completely under my control, in that hypnotic trance. Completely under my power. There would be no room for you to be nervous. You would follow my commands without question, with complete obedience.” Antonio said.

Amy didn’t say anything back. She simply kept breathing, those deep, husky breaths, gazing intently into Antonio’s eyes. A faint feeling of unease began to dawn on Rogers. He wasn’t entirely alright with the way Antonio’s intense, deep eyes seemed to attract and ensnare his wife’s gaze.

“Now, see here-“ Rogers started.

“Look into my eyes, Amy.” Antonio said, cutting off Rogers in a firm, commanding tone that Rogers had not heard from the young man before. “Look deep, deep into my eyes. Come into them. Feel the strength of my voice, feel the power of my will. As you gaze into my eyes, feel everything else slide away into the ether. You can see nothing but my eyes, hear nothing but my voice. You can focus on nothing but me. On my voice, into my eyes. Nothing else is here, everything else has faded away. Your gaze is locked on mine; your breath comes slowly, deeply, steadily. You are feeling weightless. All of your worries, all of your cares, have faded away. All you know is that you are being lifted, spirited away by my voice, by my eyes. Spirited away to a place where you feel perfectly content, perfectly wonderful. You are completely, fully relaxed as you submit to me, submit fully to my mesmeric trance.”

Rogers was outraged. This man was hypnotizing his wife right in front of him!